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Joseph L. Wiess's avatar

I feel like I've just been granted an insight into fall and winter and why some trees drop leaves and some don't.

This was very creative and whimsical.

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Kemptea's avatar

Thank you! I live in the woods, so I've had a chance to draw my own insights on tree habits. Fascinating and varied.

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The Amazing Montsta's avatar

I liked the names of the siblings, like the story itself, very whimsical. I can't put my finger on where I had heard a version of the rhyme at the start though. Nice flash piece.

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Kemptea's avatar

Thanks! Might I enlighten you?

If it's yellow, let it mellow

If it's brown ...

You know, to save water.

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The Amazing Montsta's avatar

That's hilarious. I'm a little embarrassed that slipped past me.

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