Great use of present tense. It worked well with the snappier, fast-paced sentences.
My favorite bit was the part about her being drafted, where you mention the people who didn't get chosen before and after her. It was a great example of how the whole piece shows how she's bitter. The last sentence was nice too, a good way to end on a hopeful, lucky note.
Great use of present tense. It worked well with the snappier, fast-paced sentences.
My favorite bit was the part about her being drafted, where you mention the people who didn't get chosen before and after her. It was a great example of how the whole piece shows how she's bitter. The last sentence was nice too, a good way to end on a hopeful, lucky note.
Thank you!
Cassie with some luckful bad luck. Great!